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I sat for an hour to watch a spider (Free verse) by Jimbo

July 26, 2003 ~ I sat for an hour to watch a spider ~ Daydreaming I suppose Staring out the window Thinking of something beautiful Suddenly something caught my eye A tiny spider dancing before my face ~ Up and down - side to side Back and forth it moved so swiftly I'd never sat to watch this before Swinging swiftly from end to end Arching its web ~ Gently draping silken threads So finely woven just barely visible The spider moved so quick It certainly had a mission Its threads to catch tonight's dinner maybe? ~ This tiny almost alien creature Building its home upon a window screen So intent on weaving its web I thought to myself just one swift breeze And it will be gone forever ~ I compared the web to a life I've known Working so diligently Caring loving and sharing Giving all that's possible Then suddenly under a small strain all can be gone ~ Thom

JoyLuck 30-Jul-03/10:38 PM
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that is what i did to the spider after one minute
i don't bother looking at 8 legged pieces of crap for than one minute. you know why? i'm ADD.

you're going to track his ass down over this stupid online POEMRANKER right? just give it up and continue to write. maybe you can write one called, "i stared at horus8's website for one hour and watch his video of the teacher and a swingset." then you'll have something interesting to write about. i gave your poem a ~




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