poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Monument by geewhiz1962.

DurtKL27 Jul 2003

i like this work in progress
your style is very prosy
i like it
did the helium tank really explode? lol
only prob i really have is
"the bangs had drawn a sweaty crowd of spectators....."
it seems too laid back and chill for seomthing that is
thrilling and exciting and crazy.
i hope to see the finished work