poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Jaded by Caducus.

Caducus25 Jul 2003

Ok Z thanx for that I see that now reading it over. I have added 4 new lines to the end but can't help wondering if its more powerful without them, thus ending it at 'we're ignoring right now'.

Used to write tons of lyrics and its a bit of walk back to my past.