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Truckin' (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Sunup, winter,Vail pass, Colorado Following three bullracks Drivers singing, exchanging lines over the two way radio: Roger Millers, King of the road

ecargo 23-Jul-03/7:49 AM
Clean and sharp. "Three bullracks (?) [exchanging] lines over the two way" is great. Plural kings? Quibble, quibble, nit, pick (hey, it's what I do). I like the haiku-like approach you took here.




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