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Fucking A!?!? (Pimple) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

You shoot only to prove.. You've.. Missed.. You still don't get it.. The way you see things.. One way.. Point being you don't get it do you.. By the time you get a clue.. I'll bury you.. Taking my knife.. practicing castration.. on your corpse.. Things like that.. Get me hard.. At about the moment.. You breathe your last.. Face strained.. One last gasp.. Taking your life.. Value.. More than you'll ever know..

DurtKL 19-Jul-03/5:45 PM

Look.. if you had.. one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted.. in one moment
Would you capture it.. or just let it slip? Yo..


His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
to drops bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
what he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth but the words won't come out
He's chokin, how? Everybody's jokin now
The clock's run out, time's up, over - BLAOW!




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