poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Scarecrow by horus8.

scitz15 Jul 2003

Lose the title how about:

Killing crows.


also last line possibility:
This rivers gone dirty when you turned it to wine,
At least you cant hurt me, if your no longer mine,#
She cried me a river of crocodile tears,
And I drown in the torrent of yesteryears.