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Something You'll never understand (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Its Raining Moon Beams But I’ve Got Sunscreen So we’ll be fine Lets call this a dream Starlight Shines Eyes Bright I’m all right Dancing with Death Is all I have left Nothing Makes Sense Where is my Innocence Bullet wounds Coursing through my thoughts I’ve forgot Resting in Pieces My mind is silent I’m Puzzled What is this?

thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/2:38 PM
Notice that none of this makes anysense what so ever when put together? Well a few lines work out. Its very sing song, and silly isn't it. Nope. Well, Yes and No. This is the way my mind works. The huge gaps are thoughts that whiz by so fast I have no clue what they are. My mind is Puzzled and My life is trying to quickly grab enough pieces to make some form of sense. Thats why my when I type things out I often leave out entire concepts that I wanted to write about and I'll make reference to them but they won't be there. That makes me look like a moron.




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