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For Kristen (Villanelle) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Dry your whining eyes Kristen You just have to keep in mind Broken hearts do mend Forget the words of your ex-boyfriend It’s obvious that he is blind Dry your whining eyes Kristen He still plays those same ole games he has always been If you merely look I’m sure you’ll find Broken hearts do mend Crying tears for him should be a sin Don’t let yourself be swallowed by his kind Dry your whining eyes Kristen Please don’t lose your faith in men Leave him and those wasted tears behind Broken hearts do mend Don't let that fool make you forsake mankind So rewind your hate for men and let your heart touch my mind Dry your whining eyes Kristen Broken hearts do mend

thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/11:17 PM
Again another girl Poem. This one for my Kristie. I actually wrote it for her before we started going out. It started off as a lyric and I should have kept it that way but I really wanted to try a Vilanelle. I wrote it to see her smile. No other reason in the world. She was just my friend's sister to me at the time even though I liked her alot, even then(Actually since the moment we met to be honest). Its probably among my worst 5 poems to be brutally honest.




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