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when you want your haiku to be cool but otherwise got it trashed because you are f*#ing limited by 5-7-5...and you think you can get away with it but end up getting criticized in the web (Haiku) by jardz

Go abuse the web! Think we are but great poets, but our work is crap.

Robert K Foster 20-Jun-03/5:32 AM
the limitations are what force the discipline and that is the essence of the Haiku form--beauty through discipline.
"sometimes an apparent constraint can serve to free the imagination" - Theodore Roethke




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