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Pendulum swing lines (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Distancefriend, who has entered my room in a chilled breeze through my window, here is a clock. It is round and flat and incon- sequential. Let us toss it to and fro, like a frisbee. What time do we have? The time we spend. Cycles, finite and infinite. The way a tree grows, flourishes, and dies. Then becomes paper, or a house, or fire. Invisible lightning strikes at random, and I have caught many bolts, and you.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 15-Jun-03/11:31 AM
I think "Distant friend,". Other than that, Fairly nice. -7-




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