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One Night from Now (Free verse) by phoenixxx

One night from now all will be well We will forget about how we fell And joy will reign in hearts under the moon One night from now, its coming soon We walk, barefoot on a star kissed beach Knowing our happiness is now in reach And joy we will find on the sand this night And all our wrongs will be made into rights And then our pain will turn to joy And evil's tools will be turned to toys Because true joy comes on a cresting tide An escape we will mount, a wave we will ride Far away, in a distant, silent place Where we will meet bliss face-to-face Far away, where goodness is held dear Far away from all that lives here. Untouchable, this night, we will be Away from evil, just you and me.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Jun-03/9:32 AM
Did you write this poeme by writing down a list of all the words you think would appeal to a 14-year-old girl, randomise their order, and then just insert other words between them to create sentences?




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