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Something You'll never understand (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Its Raining Moon Beams But I’ve Got Sunscreen So we’ll be fine Lets call this a dream Starlight Shines Eyes Bright I’m all right Dancing with Death Is all I have left Nothing Makes Sense Where is my Innocence Bullet wounds Coursing through my thoughts I’ve forgot Resting in Pieces My mind is silent I’m Puzzled What is this?

INTRANSIT 12-Jun-03/6:32 PM
nice to see someone so young have a backbone. keep it you'll need it all life long. take this piece, stack it up, play shuffle the statements with them, and see what comes up. you never know.




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