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Advise (Free verse) by Audaciouslilgrl

In a world filled with hate, There's only so much you can take. You meet people, listen to the comments they make, Then watch, as they make their mistakes. So many people thought they were better then you. When all their friends are gone, whom will they turn to? Your parents are here to teach you, but you never let them reach you. There's a lot they don't know, but they can't let that show. They think if they give you more space, In their footsteps you'll trace. Sometimes that's true, but you've got to learn for you. So my only advice to you: Do what you must do, But watch the world around you. Each day, learn something new. Never be afraid just to be you.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Jun-03/4:33 PM
I really love your pointless use of colons, and your consistant confusing of 'than' for "then". Hey, when you get sick of being an idiot perhaps you could go back to just being you? Alas, you'd still be an idiot, but what the fuck, some sperm never swim straight out the gate, and some sperm just float on the backs of others, or in a proper face holster they are carried home to glory. GLORY! What were we talking about again? Ah, yeah, you blowing me for charity, whatta ya say, do your poor newbie friends a favor sacrafice yourself to -=Dark_Angel=- to appease the beast within, and save the future of bad poets on poemranker.




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