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Holiday In Hell (Lyric) by systemofadown

invisible Ammunitions premature Hallucinations Decapitated Roadsigns a desperate Sigh! Upfront the Bravesoul a Certified Asshole Now Date the Capital cession my home to the Cannibal Pisstalk, Chainsmoking campaigne Slice the deal, work a chameleon re-write the tremendous Chaos Disperse the hate generous Man Stands fearless A gentleman remorseless So who raped you Sire? they stepped in your shrine Address the man of God! suppress the Supremacy Play man for his Class the Rich Suppository up his ass wake up to Relief must you decieve? The devil bets your soul to the common Void should have heard her when she cried~ this is your holiday in hell so breakout of your shell dont marry my kind swim my brain juice and you'll find when there is no one left to thrill Its high time to kill!

RealmOfSong 9-Jun-03/9:12 PM
I figured I'd tell you again that I really like this poem. I think the fact that it is busy gives it some power and sets a really good mood. To me, it seems like "This is your holiday in hell" sounds like it is ending. But that's just the way that I am thinking right now.




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