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Never Be (Free verse) by Felzpoet

Nothing I ever felt could compare To my love for you even without you there The pain I feel is more than I can bare Yet this feeling is what makes me care It’s the best feeling I ever had And even with all the pain it is never bad Although the thought of losing you drives me mad Because of you I can never be sad I know you will never love me I know I will forever love thee The only thing I want more than you and me to be Is for us to be around for each other to see The pain is nothing to how good I feel When you are around my existence feels real My love for you I will never conceal Even if the truth is hard to reveal That ill never again be with you Cause your feelings for me could never be true For you are in love too So maybe ill try to find someone new But they could never take your place Or make me forget the beauty of your face You made all my pain vanish without a trace The void left in my heart is something I could never replace How you do this to me I will never know I hope you remember me when it is time to go My love for you, through my veins it will forever flow It is more than you will ever know

Vipersna 1-Jun-03/7:58 PM
Felz, I loved it. For real. I'm more of a rhyming, and the beat was a lil off (I do beat poetry, so i might be a lil harsh) it's great though!




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