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Answered Prayers (Free verse) by Pooh_N_His_Honey

Tears fell like rain, from all the years of pain. My life began to get rough, Meanwhile I pretended I was so tough. I told myself over and over, enough was enough. So one day I closed the door , I walked , And never looked back... Soon my life was on the right track. I often dreamed of a love that would be so true, My prayers were answered and he sent me you !! It all began with a single touch, Sparks flew, Although it may not seemed like much. Then we shared our first kiss, I never have felt such a feeling like this. In my mind, I was wondering if we were not moving to fast, But in my heart, I knew that this was something that was going to last. You are my soulmate, The love of my life, I have this wish, That one day I will become your wife. You are my lover, and my best friend, Your my gift sent from god. I will cherish you now and ever, I will love you forever.

Robert K Foster 23-May-03/10:40 AM
maybe liquid concrete. I suggest boning up on the classifications of poetry. this, and the other, are freeform.




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