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Was/Were You? (Concrete) by Alyssa91

Was I just meant to die? Was I put here to cry? For the way my life is treated I am never undefeated. So, Was I drugged up everyday? Was I hooked up with Mr.Ray? Well my life is never decided upon my actions Or maybe they decdided in tiny fractions What we'll never know is whats inside if your always in a hide. So, Really! were you just meant to die? Or were you put here to cry?

dodgersfan2 21-May-03/6:41 PM
Pretty good, not great - 7




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