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we're insane (Free verse) by nolan

ok, so we have it decided one of us is insane but i can't tell can you? are the stares your way as i am included or are they at me and you're ignorant are you talking because i can't believe that the tree has an eye or is it a tree shake shake i am michael moore but too scared and little to tell you turn and look past the window oh please don't come we are not on coke we are not smoking dope the mother door opens begin at 1, and enjoy the high lets climb and climb ten miles high but we quickly widthdraw from the road saying we would be better off dead flip my body, flip my head look into the shake i think its me what are you saying? don't laugh at me! what is going on? common really? oh..... maybe it is just me

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-May-03/1:02 PM
Yes well nolan you've made your views on the matter only too clear with this embarrassingly dismal effort. And yet surely you're not so blind that you're too blind to see that poetry isn't about expressing yourself: it's about trying to express yourself. And what about beauty? Where does that fit in to your grand little scheme of things? Doesn't beauty have a place in poetry? I think it does. And I think you need to have a long, hard think about what you've done. You make me very sorry, nolan. Very sorry indeed.




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