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we're insane (Free verse) by nolan

ok, so we have it decided one of us is insane but i can't tell can you? are the stares your way as i am included or are they at me and you're ignorant are you talking because i can't believe that the tree has an eye or is it a tree shake shake i am michael moore but too scared and little to tell you turn and look past the window oh please don't come we are not on coke we are not smoking dope the mother door opens begin at 1, and enjoy the high lets climb and climb ten miles high but we quickly widthdraw from the road saying we would be better off dead flip my body, flip my head look into the shake i think its me what are you saying? don't laugh at me! what is going on? common really? oh..... maybe it is just me

nolan 12-May-03/11:28 AM
sorry if there were too little ideas, but i actually based this on an experience i once had when i convinced myself i was insane. i can't remember all the reasons why i believed that, but these are my mental notes on what happened. i create poetry based on my feelings and my feelings had no more ideas.. sorry i let you down




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