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FeaR (Free verse) by psikosis

In bondage I keep you, with chains, I beat you. Until you know my name, until you scream in pain. In Hades I keep you, with fire I burn you. Until you bleed for me, until you beg for me. In FeaR I keep you, with my words, I kill you. Until you finally see, this is my destiny. I'm straight out of line, my methods will stand the test of time. I hold the key to your fate, my demons have entered the gate. Possession inside, they all hide, inside I've died, I never cried.

psikosis 9-May-03/10:27 AM
First of all "horus8", I don't consider myself a "tough guy." Second of all I would never listen to siouxe and the banshees! I just write what comes out, and I gladly accept constructive criticism, but not flat out mean comments from some one who doesn't understand where I was coming from. Yes, a real man does shed tears, and that capital R had nothing to do with it.




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