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Let The Music Take You Away (Remix) (Lyric) by Miggy

(Original by jwknights261) I sat down as I wrote a song, A song about all my wrong, Sat down and wrote this song for you, About all the things you do I never meant for you to be angry, Just wanted us to live in jubilee Closing my eyes, I'm glad to got you I close them I knowing that you got me too (Chorus) Let the music take you away It'll do the rest Let the music free your soul Help you to be the best Let the music set you free Of all of your problems When the music takes you away It can help you solve them Looking up in the setting sky Reminds me of your beauty flash in my eye With my focus nowhere else but you As days, weeks, and months just flew Nothing ever kept us apart Mixing this relationship into one grand art (Chorus) When we first met, it had to be a must From the feelings inside I had to trust Making my fantasy into reality As we love each other though eternity With you my life finally has a meaning And your kiss can stop my internal bleeding (Chorus) (Bridge) With you my soul is now complete With you my heart won't skip a beat And through all this now I can see That this song will end in harmony (Chorus ending)

dodgersfan2 8-May-03/6:34 PM
Nice job. I like what you did with my song. You, honestly, made it a little better. I gave a 6 instead of something higher b/c it is just a different version of my idea and a few different lines than from the original




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