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Stop it I'm Dizzy! (Free verse) by Lenore

My head is spinning from the news from Palestine and the Jews It's the constant threat of dying and governments all lying Terrorists in the streets terror when I sleep Violent images in my dreams and on the screen wasted lives and beaten wives The Taliban on the run India and Pakistan who has the bigger gun? look out Iraq your day is coming they'll send your people running make it stop my head is spinning where is peace when war is winning? at accelerated pace death marches in the race he's trampled on the dove and made no room for love hate and violence rule anger is it's tool they're teaching it in school religion and politics cozy mates indeed corporate crooks keep crooked books fat cats who feed on greed yes my friends I'll tell you true my head is spinning fast I only wish I knew how long this craziness will last

Red_is_life 16-Jul-02/2:35 AM
Love this. You know your subject matter and you're not afraid to say what you think. The structure really works and so does the whole thing (9)




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