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The Lie (The Last But True One) (Lyric) by Miggy

I thought there was nothing I could lose, But try to fill my shoes Maybe, I could have hurt you Also, I could have harmed her too This thing made me look like a fool Still, this sad thing isn't new... (Refrain) It's because of this lie that you're not here But losing our relationship is what I fear I may love her, but I look up to you Hoping when I say sorry to you, it will come true I'm sorry that I put you on the spotlight But that is no reason that we have to fight So I do like her, it may be her personality But I realize that your feelings are reality You still do mean a lot to me.. (Refrain) I will confess, but give me some time I am waiting for your forgiveness to shine My love may be harmful, but it's a real thing It made me write, it made me sad, it made me sing But up to now, I still do cry Just because of a simple lie... (Refrain x2)

dodgersfan2 5-May-03/7:02 PM
Good. Would've been a -10- but i just don't like when in the last line in the REFRAIN it should be
"hoping when i say sorry, it will come true"
instead of "hoping when i say sorry to you..."
i feel it messes up the rythm of the song ---9---




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