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Equation (Lyric) by Miggy

As I calculate life, Got reminded of The complicated year Couldn’t overwrite Whatever did go wrong As the end is near Experience overwhelms Youth fades away Trying to find a place to find Never looked for help When you come to stay Where all the thoughts begin (Chorus) Putting the foot down Never knew if it reached the ground -------------------------------------------- Hoping to inspire Like you once were Being a man for others While days where filled with fire All you wanted to learn Why I even bother Using the same routine Following the footsteps of before But disrespect interferes Wants treatment like a human being Can’t take it anymore Purpose substituted by fear Began as a simple failure To isolate the trouble Shutting all your feelings inside Still went by will To create another double Even with all the pain provided (Chorus) (Bridge) Trying to make an impact Even with all we lack And now you saw We thanks we show (Chorus ending)

Ranger 2-May-03/12:51 PM
Fair enough. I like these lyrics, they're showing potential.




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