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Kiddy's (Free verse) by Bobjim

Kiddy's, kiddy's are so fun, Kiddy's, kiddy's up the bum, Kiddy's, kiddy's and thier mums, Kiddy's, kiddy's, whoops, I've cum.

Bobjim 28-Apr-03/1:36 PM
Dear, oh dear. Is someone feeling bitter? What is it then, hmmm?
More penis envey or just blinded by my talent?
Let me just nit-pick: Typo line 3, word 2, you illiterate goon. Also the end doesn't ryme. That is my old style, fool, not like my current style. And you can't come in my arse as even I have some standerds.




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