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psudobackstabber (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

At one time I thought I couldn't be bought Now I need to rot Man you don't get it I once trusted you fully Now you're more than a bully God man it hurt the way I fell More than a schrapnol shell Worst of all no one to tell Maybe it just pissed me What we had is hitory It wasn't really you that hurt me Forget it, youre nothing now Momma I made a mistake Thinkin' he wasn't fake The pieces of my heart still No way to pay the medical bill No way for me to fulfill This shattered destiny No matter now it never mattered then I stopped feelin' pain a while ago Sittin here waitin' for my chance at death row Man what I did I'll admit it was low Even now I don't exactly care You'll back down from my stare So what you never cared 'bout fair How's it feel to know I'm above the rest Hey I learned from the best I can stand alone No need to think I'll atone

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25-Apr-03/11:28 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA you blocked it out and can't remember anymore? What utter B.S. The reason why you don't know exactly why you wrote this piece is that there is no reason. Or rather the reason isn't anywhere near as dramatic as you'd like to think. You probably just wanted to sound like someone who had been betrayed or something just to sound deep. Even if it is partly based on fact, it's almost certainly far too mundane an experience to be forcibly blocked from your memory because it's too painful. I suggest you write a poeme about a true tragedy - like why your life is so devoid of deepness and emotional complexity. Take me, for instance. I've got loads of emotions. I know loads about pain and betrayal. I've been through shit, man. Shit you wouldn't believe. Even if it landed right on your face. Did you know that sometimes, at night, I hear a strange crying sound coming out just below my nose?




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