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FRAGILE (Free verse) by calilegzzz

A heart is a flower That sways in the wind No matter how light it blows The flower always bends If the wind blows to hard The flower might break For there is only so much A heart can take

rockinindividual 16-Apr-03/1:54 PM
this is a piece of third grade crap in my opinion.
theres nothing about it that will stand out, that will make me remember it. its something i might have read before from some lovestruck wanna be elementary school poet. try again, my dear. 0.




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