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Flash of Light (Free verse) by Todd

Flash of light that split the sky, illuminated Heaven a couple of seconds. That mortal eye could glimpse the wonder. In the night,this is so, I've seen lightning,but one bolt, that divided darkness, shone light beyond the sky, provided a glimpse unto my eyes, mind and to my soul,that Heaven is so. The Lords home,this is true, will dwell on earth with me and you. So is written: "Thy kingdom come,thy will be done, on earth as it is in Heaven" Todd J.Caudill

god'swife 14-Apr-03/2:56 PM
What, exactly, did you see??? What does your poem talk about???

In a sudden flash of lightning I realized there is a heaven.

How? Why? Explain yourself. Not in the comments, but in the poem.

Glimpse the wonder of letting your imagination come up with some scenarios.






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