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For Kristen (Villanelle) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Dry your whining eyes Kristen You just have to keep in mind Broken hearts do mend Forget the words of your ex-boyfriend It’s obvious that he is blind Dry your whining eyes Kristen He still plays those same ole games he has always been If you merely look I’m sure you’ll find Broken hearts do mend Crying tears for him should be a sin Don’t let yourself be swallowed by his kind Dry your whining eyes Kristen Please don’t lose your faith in men Leave him and those wasted tears behind Broken hearts do mend Don't let that fool make you forsake mankind So rewind your hate for men and let your heart touch my mind Dry your whining eyes Kristen Broken hearts do mend

lunar 9-Apr-03/12:43 PM
I just asked because its obvious u spend alot of time on this site! (its a decent site i would too if i had the time!) im at college with about half the people on this site -devosky (cannot spell it!), t'ien, bobjim, MuDeNve, ranger, blade, cleverdevice, yardbird etc! thats how i know about this site - i never thought i could write poetry until this site and its made me see some of my friends in a really different light coz ppl write things on here theyd never say! Ive noticed there are not very many females though and everyone seems to be gay!oh well i guess what poetry does to you x




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