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Tell me I suck (Free verse) by Blindproject217

This is for all the warm thoughtful comments I received. Never a stranger to do the untried Determined and Blank faced I poured out my soul Here, I thought could be a place to confide With your snide remarks and interjections With no point or purpose You load and shoot me down Just to see a rise in me, or a bitter reaction So how is it, now that you have won Is it all you wanted Was this your point Just for amusement just for fun Ill tell you once, and never again, this is how it ends You wont make me quit You wont break me So get all your angry comments for me ready to send Please tell me how much this sucks, thank you.

razorgrin 2-Apr-03/6:23 AM
You swallow.




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