<~>28 Mar 2003

why do i have a problem with the wind carving snowflakes? it irritates me. i am such a realist. why can't i warp my mind around a logical twist? ugh.

anyway, i like it. but i think the strongest part is
"The important thing
is to cut the right wire
when defusing the time-bomb".

but then, i also think that that's a separate poem. the ideas aren't melded enough for me, in this poem's current state. hope that helps.