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Shut Up (Free verse) by openwounds

I removed my tongue last night . Never felt pain, couldn't wait I cut it slowly, taking care . Silence is the only sound I hear My words were killing me . didn't need it really A clean blade soon bathed in blood . falling on the white carpet they just laughed . I saved it . in a jar It's ugly just like the words were . Now I'm pretty

openwounds 23-Mar-03/9:03 PM
Well since my life is of no concern to you - don't wonder. I highly doubt that the thought of removing ones tongue was on the mind of any child at Columbine, not sure what that has to do with the poem, but ok. Also, I never said it was a joke. I take all of my poetry very seriously. And maybe the children at Columbine were thinking something like 'I'm never going to see my family again'. Of course, that is 'freeky weird stuff' right? Maybe not ..




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