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Shut Up (Free verse) by openwounds

I removed my tongue last night . Never felt pain, couldn't wait I cut it slowly, taking care . Silence is the only sound I hear My words were killing me . didn't need it really A clean blade soon bathed in blood . falling on the white carpet they just laughed . I saved it . in a jar It's ugly just like the words were . Now I'm pretty

Blindproject217 23-Mar-03/7:29 PM
Im not trying to stereotype I just see this kinda stuff all the time, what do you think was going through the kids minds at Colubine, probably this kinda freeky wierd stuff, so for you to make somthing deranged as this makes me wonder whats going on in your life. Even if its a joke its not funny.




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