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Shut Up (Free verse) by openwounds

I removed my tongue last night . Never felt pain, couldn't wait I cut it slowly, taking care . Silence is the only sound I hear My words were killing me . didn't need it really A clean blade soon bathed in blood . falling on the white carpet they just laughed . I saved it . in a jar It's ugly just like the words were . Now I'm pretty

poetandknowit 23-Mar-03/7:07 PM
Can you really hear silence? I believe there is a point in complete quiet where the ears can actually feel pain because they are trying so hard to hear something. Anyway, besides that I find the poem quite bad. Sorry. Have a nice day.




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