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While flipping over stones (Sonnet) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

I found my love under a rock. In the backyard of my mind. With bare feet I'll load then cock. Although I'm shooting blind. It was that reckless attitude. Those chances I would take. I should have shown more gratitude. When they warned me of the snake. 'stead I frolicked mad in rapture. While flipping over stones. A worm was coiled and poised to capture. The rolling of my bones. My head swings low, so sets the sun. Those holes bleed slow, the snake has won.

god'swife 18-Mar-03/10:17 PM
How does leaving a spontaneous and very very funny reply on your comment consitute butting in? I don't give a flying fuck about your dynamic, and if there is really something worth while between the two of you what possible influence is what I write going to have? I just enjoy making fun of you.

Bi-polar is not a virus. It doesn't come and go, you either are or you aren't. You will always be Ornella to me. Please don't forget to invite me to the wedding.




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