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lost
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elizabethann
crying infants. tear-stricken faces. weeping adults black stained cheeks. horror filled eyes, haunted by blood covered bodies. cry ... weep ... dust blows over the wounds that were never there.
Blindproject217
17-Mar-03/4:16 PM
I understand it, I just dont see where its going. Its just a random mental image with no purpose. I dont mean to trash peoples stuff, Im just given my 10 cents, thats what this whole thing is about
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