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Goin? Down Baby (Free verse) by Drummer

Goin? Down Baby ~ got a fucked up feelin? cant put it right rubbin? ground outta sight body and air fuckit don?t care its about scorn and pity about feelin? shitty its about innocence and guilt and day time blahs I?m goin? down baby feel like shit almost always but hardly ever makin? a world go way forever pinned down spirits burning in flames listenin? to myself complain just goin? down sinkin? again need some air too much despair cut the mournin? off move on with mornin? so fucked up just goin? down again baby not too shabby all this shit holiday time sinkin? pit fuckit all don?t mean shit

Nanshe 11-Mar-03/9:33 PM
Angry young man meets question mark? Watch those apostrophes. They don't play nice when you cut and paste. Please fix. Namaste.




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