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Greek Tragedy#1
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Mr Pig
Aeolus sighs, Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks, Wooden seahorses drown.
Nanshe
26-Feb-03/6:44 PM
As for the poem, I suggest you invert the structure, so:
Wooden seahorses drown.
Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks
As Aeolus sighs.
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