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Greek Tragedy#1 (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Aeolus sighs, Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks, Wooden seahorses drown.

Nanshe 26-Feb-03/6:44 PM
As for the poem, I suggest you invert the structure, so:

Wooden seahorses drown.
Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks
As Aeolus sighs.




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