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Asian Bicycle Saga (Free verse) by TanHand

herro I good at math ROOKIE ROOKIE I STEAL UR BICYCLE! I have little member to type up lincos YOU NO MAKE ME COSYSOP!! good at math Young un's sit on Chan's rap He stroke beard and tell you all big story!! I see you outside cobol crassloom You ask me hey 'dude' what you doing in my way I don't see no fucking train tracks No dirty shirt to raundel No leason to bow like dippy dippy water bird No pachinko machine to service with tiny lincos member And then you feign feal cos you think I rike bruce lee or chun lee or law from tekken when in reality I don't even rike them I just rike anyone else When I rook in bathroom mirror I wipe con..condenSAtion off Do not know what I am rooking at Is mystery to me <sfx: gong>

ianswriting 17-Feb-03/12:45 PM
Technically this is fine. I personally don't like the content. Maybe poetry is supposed to evoke a reaction, but I guess that explains my rating.




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