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distance (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Endless are the cycles of touch and fade Best intentions fall through fingers like sand as we dance this dance to deaths gaze Imperfect in the most perfect light of this they seek solace in the things we loath and yet we desire the same Endless are these cycles of touch and fade when worst comes to best you will be the jar carrying every grain of intent to display for friends Friends you will never need but want for knowledge and the accumulation of best intentions.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Jan-03/2:00 PM
Confusing as those "sound of one hand clapping" type questions but i like the 2nd and 3rd lines.




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