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mornings, january (Haiku) by <~>

sharp wind whips wet hair to pointed frozen tangles between house and car

Quarton 24-Jan-03/8:34 AM
Seems kind of mundane for a haiku
but perhaps I am missing something.
Still, not bad and better than a
four. Hell, thinking about it,
everything is mundane to a greater
or lesser degree.




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