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The Good Old Days in New Orleans (Haiku) by cobalt

it rains and rains and everything's underwater except the bodies

GregDeEgg 23-Jan-03/4:11 PM
Very nice. That last line took me aback. I had to re-read it to make sure I read it correctly. Good imaging.




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