Ranger23 Jan 2003
An enjoyable read (although it was quite difficult to concentrate-must not listen to Crash Test Dummies while reading poetry!).
Yes, anyway-this is good, Mr. poetandknowit. I especially like the last bit of the second stanza very much. It's something slightly different to normal.
Perhaps now that I've acknowledged you're a good writer you'll feel more inclined to give me some help? :)
It would be greatly appreciated.
Regardless, I think I'll give this a nine.