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Impermanence (Other) by Corey McHattan

I thought I saw, and so it was, Something strange, that made me pause; A headstone cold, and flowers bright, Both decaying, in falling night.

OneFingerAnswer 10-Jul-02/12:03 AM
"A headstone cold, and flowers bright,
Both decaying..."

That's actually something I've noticed before. I think you wrote a good poem here.




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