Ranger21 Jan 2003
Well now, food for thought indeed! First and foremost, this was written as a lyric because that's what I am best at (although I've just written a free verse which I will submit soon for you lot to read). That is why I a) rhyme and b) use 'fillers'. I personally prefer to have a set rhythm and therefore I attempt to fill it to the best degree possible don't know if that makes any sense, but hey). I agree that in some cases the information is unnecessary, however it tends to be that I'm writing this online and think hmm, that doesn't fit-what can I put in? That is part of the reason why it's not wholly useful.
Anyway, thanks for your help-hope to hear from you a bit later-and I'll submit this other one that I'd like you to read.