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Bloodsucker (Limerick) by hobojo

Like a nightwalker you needed to feed Nothing could satiate your need Just to hear the sound of your voice... You were my drug of choice For so long all I did was bleed

Robert K Foster 17-Jan-03/10:49 AM
rhyme scheme, OK
but the rhythm is amiss.
a fine poem, but not really limericky.




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