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Death (Free verse) by MuDvAyNe

Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death Death In The Garden Of Eden

dantron 14-Jan-03/6:47 AM
oh dear this poem is.....bloody awful! i suggest you go back to school and take 'grammer'!




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