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One Word (Free verse) by T. Becquerel

One word Will destroy all Will loose the lives of many, and yet, Will resume life And filter its existence. One word Will take itself, Will read deep into itself, and yet, Will fight itself, And remember nothing. One word Will know all, Will give advice to many, and yet, Will remain calm, And be a bottomless pit. That word, Will be asked, Will answer without recall, and yet, Will still not know, And that word is I.

anonymous 21-Jun-01/11:47 PM
too staccato for my tastes... hmm. it feels pretentious as well.




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