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??????? (Free verse) by Emotionz

I've been stabbed once again, deep in the wounds of my heart, just as they were healing memories come flowing back my past catches up with me. No matter how far i run or try to hide it always manages to find me and tear me apart, It's like a diease, just when you think you've been cured it strikes again but this time even worse, I'm a soul to there soul I'm a heart beat to there heart, with out me they will not exsist they will not be able to breathe Because i am the food the crave, the food there mouth waters for, the food there taste buds are iger to taste....

razorgrin 9-Jan-03/11:46 AM
that's pretty bad. bad spelling (took me a while to figure out what 'iger' is). Stabbed in the wound? That's some aim.




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