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I Love You!! (Free verse) by Babieflirt

I have never felt a pain this strong This feeling is new for me Was it something I did wrong Will my heart ever break free?????? I do not know how long this all will last I dont know if it will ever fade The time we spent together was such a blast As the joy and memories were made Sitting here looking at pictures of us together Wishing I would have done a few things differently When I wish upon a shooting~star, I hope our future is better I hope to hear from you soon, but I wait patiently?????? I hear our song on the radio I start to cry and I have to sit down I think of the time we spent looking at the stars on the patio The laughing, the crying, and the talking is all in my memory, not with one frown?????? There were those cute little things you would whisper in my ear The chills ran down my spine when we kissed To me you are as cute as a teddy bear Only if you knew you were the one that I always missed?????? Do you ever see the star lit sky and think of me Have you ever wondered what all the strong feelings meant When you hear songs that remind you of me do you skip quickly over or let it be Have you forgotten what I can??????t Now that you know what??????s in my heart I sit here and wonder what you think too I wish we didn??????t live so far apart It wasn??????t a lie when I told you I loved you and it will always be true I Love You

ChunkyHunkyMonkey 8-Jan-03/4:11 PM
great poem i love it and once again yes i have been there b4 it hurts but all you have left is the memories the good ones and the bad ones




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